Before Naruto...... (Other)

Chapter 0: Intro

This is when the Hokage never existed. Before there was a hidden leaf village. All of the other hidden villages attacked the Land of Fire, but they had no resistance. Now, one brave shinobi defended it. He is now known as Shodai, or The First Hokage. At that time, he was a rogue ninja, searching for a place to call his own when he found the Land of Fire. He was driven to the center before he defended it with his best jutsu. “Secret wood jutsu: great forest creation!” he shouted casting a powerful jutsu.

All of a sudden, a giant forest appeared strait out of the ground. It wiped out every opposing ninja, and created the hidden leaf village. There were many people from the Land of Fire who came to the new village, as well as shinobi from other hidden villages. Now, Konohagakure village was born. And the first Hokage was named…

so, what do you think of the "creation" story?

Ok heres my variation of Rasengs story.

Though the Hidden Leaf Village is now one of the mightiest of all the kage villages, there was once a time when the place hadn't existed, a time when there was no Hokage, a time when the Village itself hadn't sprung from the Earth.
Though all other Villages were attacking the Land of Fire, it did not resent the attacks. There is only one known Shinobi who fought in the battle, Shodai. But of course, heroes are made, not born. Shodai, just as all Ninja's at the time, was a rougue Ninja.
Shodai is forced to retreat to the center of the Land Of Fire. He decides initially to use his best jutsu. "Secret wood jutsu: Great Forest Creation!" He shouts.
A sea of Green sprouts out of the Earth, killing all the opposeing Ninja, staining the forest floor with blood red streaks of freedom, bodies lay everywhere. As the new life of the forest spreads the lilves of the enimes are stolen, giveing the Forests fertile land to further insure its prosperous outcome.
Shinobi from all differnt countrys and Hidden Villages flock to the new Village, along with people already stationed there.
A new village, new people, a new leader, a Hokage.
Shodai, the first.

okay, i appreciate [am annoyed] that you corrected every single error i had in my typing.


so annyone else have a comment?

i'm still fixing up Chapter 2: Creation of Konoha (i'm gonna give that title preview every time)

Your just mad cus I'm better at it^__^

lol really good, but one jutsu can defeat all?

he's kage.......
i just wanted to rush, and get to the main storyline....
i'm trying, okay!?

i finished chapter 1 and am starting chapter 2. i'll put Chapter 1 up in 3 more comments

raseng kage wrote:

he's kage.......
i just wanted to rush, and get to the main storyline....
i'm trying, okay!?

i finished chapter 1 and am starting chapter 2. i'll put Chapter 1 up in 3 more comments

Ok. So is there going to be a fight soon or is Sarutobi gonna flop over dead or somethin'?

well, lets wait for the chapter and find out!

Good chapter.

We must wait to find out!

i know i'm supposed to post the next chapter now, but i have it on a program that wont work! i can get to it any time i want, but i cant get it on the internet.

sorry to disappoint you [if any] fans out there, but it wont come for a while. sorry.

raseng kage wrote:

Chapter 0: Intro

This is when the Hokage never existed. Before there was a hidden leaf village. All of the other hidden villages attacked the Land of Fire, but they had no resistance. Now, one brave shinobi defended it. He is now known as Shodai, or The First Hokage. At that time, he was a rogue ninja, searching for a place to call his own when he found the Land of Fire. He was driven to the center before he defended it with his best jutsu. “Secret wood jutsu: great forest creation!” he shouted casting a powerful jutsu.

All of a sudden, a giant forest appeared strait out of the ground. It wiped out every opposing ninja, and created the hidden leaf village. There were many people from the Land of Fire who came to the new village, as well as shinobi from other hidden villages. Now, Konohagakure village was born. And the first Hokage was named…

so, what do you think of the "creation" story?

It takes u that long to come up wit one measly little chapter. That is also small. Try writeing more than 30 pages in size 12 font times new roman. Then, you can tell me your stories better than mine.

raseng-ttebayo wrote:

Chapter 0: Intro

This is when the Hokage never existed, and before there was a hidden leaf village. All of the other hidden villages attacked the Land of Fire, but they had no resistance. Now, one brave shinobi defended it. He is now known as Shodai, or The First Hokage. At that time, he was a rogue ninja, searching for a place to call his own when he found the Land of Fire. He was driven to the center before he defended it with his best jutsu. “Secret wood jutsu: great forest creation!” he shouted casting a powerful jutsu.

All of a sudden, a giant forest appeared strait out of the ground. It wiped out every opposing ninja, and created the hidden leaf village. There were many people from the Land of Fire who came to the new village, as well as shinobi from other hidden villages. Now, Konohagakure village was born. And the first Hokage was named…

So, what do you think of the "creation" story?

I'm going to change it and go on from there.

Chapter 1: Konohagakure
[A new village will start a new era. The era of the leaves was underway!]

*Tak, tak, tak, tak* Shodaime and Nidaime were running through a dense forest in The Land of Fire. There were many ninja following them from behind. Nidaime called to his brother, "Hey. Wouldn't this be more than far enough for--?" "No," Shodaime interrupted, "It's not too much farther from here, so calm down." A few minutes later, they arrived at a large plain with many trees, but less than the rest of the forest. A few mountains were standing north of them, near the back of their current position. Shodaime stopped moving near the edge of it. Then Nidaime caught up and stopped, too. “Here?” Nidaime asked almost annoyed. Shodaime looked through the area. First left then he looked right. “Yes. It’s perfect here.”

One day later…
There was an established village in the middle of its creation. There were also villages being started in most other major countries at the time. Back in Konoha, the villagers were carving a face in the stone mountains. It was Shodaime’s face being carved in the stone. He was then remembered as The First Hokage. What will come of this new-found village?

Next chapter:
A Young Sarutobi

Nice, when're you going to post the next chapter?

When ever I type it up. It should be weekly in a few months. I'm busy!