blaze

its going to be a manga (i hope)(probably not) but i wanted to post this as a prieview.

he stared stared at his enemy he thought was long dead. " thres no way its you!?". "sorry but i am alive and well." " oh well ill just beat you again!"
( charges with with his and enemy nocks him aside) "what!!?" "youv gotten weak boy!" (enemy knocks him into a mountin) "thats it you really have goten we- (BOOM!) "what the?" " sorry but i'm not dead yet. hahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! lightning barrage!!" (siwpes attack aside like a twig) "what?!" take this tallen slicer!!" "lightning barrage!" (blood gose into the air, thud)
to be continued...

... I have nothing to say but get more practice, and body in it. There are a lot of other things I could say, but I'll leave it with grammer and spelling.